Greetings, everybody... I bid you
welcome, for this, my contribution to the Heroines of Fantasy Fright Fest...
I’m not a great fan of writing short stories.
It's too much effort, for too little reward. I mean this in the intellectual sense; it’s
like listening to Bach’s Well-Tempered Klavier when I’d much rather be absorbed in a vast sweeping epic symphony.
But occasionally, just occasionally, something connects in my head and
out pops a story.
Today I’m going to post part of a story which is certainly horrible, and
which was inspired by an incident which took place more than two decades ago. I was tending a much-loved horse on a cold January night. The local
fox-hunt had been around that day, and one of the huntsmen was out in the pitch
black freezing fog, blowing his horn to recall a stray hound. That's all you could hear, a desolate hunting horn, interspersed with the lonely voice of the hunt servant.
At around the same time, I was working as a
council archaeologist in Glasgow: I’d stumbled across references to a very
peculiar Neolithic site in South Lanarkshire which consists of a vast circular bank
and ditch, built in the middle of nowhere in a hollow halfway up a hillside. It was reused as a burial place in the Bronze Age.
Years later, the
ideas finally connected and a story was born. The end result was,
I suppose, my tribute to the Bronze Age and Scottish Archaeology. It also provided an ideal a way of
exorcising my hostility towards fox-hunting!
As an interesting afterword, I finally visited that site on a field survey just last year.
Yes, there was a raven. And yes,
I showed him/her deliberate courtesy, just in case...
Unfortunately, I can’t share the whole story with you, because it’s just
too long. But here’s the opening – extra
Brownie points to those who spot all the archaeological references!
Enjoy!!
Down in the valley, the hounds are calling. The emasculated bray of the
horn rings out once, twice.
Morrigan’s dark ears swivel and she looks up, curious, not frightened.
She sniffs the air, remembers hunts from long ago, when her power was at its
zenith. The horns were different then. Strident, glorious...
She blunders through
undergrowth. But ‘she’ isn’t a ‘she’. She’s a boar, all male reek and power.
Hounds nip at her heels.
Morrigan turns at bay with a roar, eyes glittering red, breath steaming in the
cold air. When Morrigan tosses her head, hounds are thrown aside like straw.
They yelp and whimper as she stamps their bones into the mud...
Morrigan settles comfortably back into the brambles. Her gold eyes gleam
in the dim light, the ground beneath her damp with dew. Drops of water hang
like jewels from the gossamer that sags amongst the twigs.
It’s an ancient place. It reminds her of times past. While the trees and
shrubs are not old, they taste the age from earth and water. They whisper it to
those who can hear. But such places are few and far between now. Only small
islands remain, in a sea of land that’s been ripped by the plough, over and
over again, throughout the centuries.
She sees the flash of
sunlight on bronze, hears the shouts of men erupt around her. It’s only now that Morrigan feels truly alive.
They drive their spears deep, into her body, but Morrigan feels no pain. Her
rage is primal, she thrusts herself forward, making the spear squelch more
firmly into her guts.
Perhaps, when Morrigan recalls these times, she understands what it is
to be old. She’s lived through aeons,
and now...
She cannot recall a time when her powers have been so weak.
It’s been two thousand years since the Christchild came, but Morrigan
doesn’t mourn the passing of the ancient days. She’s incapable of mourning. She
observes the movement of sun and moon with a dispassionate eye, knowing that
like the moon, her strength waxes and wanes.
Though these days, even the Christchild’s power is waning. Men worship
new gods. They no longer care for the land, instead they take green fields and
strip them bare to bedrock. Thousands of years, lost in an instant. Old places
despoiled, their magic forgotten, and where they once stood, houses are built,
row upon row, identical.
Morrigan wanders far and she’s seen it for herself. Perhaps even she
mourns the destruction of the wild places, the old places, and the memories
they carried. Perhaps that’s why, when she finds them, she clings to them. She
likes to laze in the shadow of the standing stones, to lie on hilltops where
once the bones were picked clean by the carrion birds, where the corrupt flesh
was scoured from the relics of the ancestral dead.
The horn sounds again. A twig snaps, closer to hand. Morrigan’s being
quivers with expectation, her snout twitches as she catches the whiff of Man.
Voices. “It’ll be over soon.” The speaker’s a male. A tall, slender
young man. He sounds disgruntled. His hair’s dyed, jet black with a streak of
vivid red. He wears it long, tied back in the old warrior way...
Her long tusk pierces flesh,
blood runs warm over her jaws. A young man screams, but he’s brave. He will not
yield. With his last strength, he draws his sword, slashes down. The bronze
blade strikes her neck, hacking through muscle, bone, but Morrigan isn’t held
captive in mortal flesh. She just shakes her head and gores him harder.
Their eyes meet briefly.
Burning red against ice-cold blue. She sees terror, but she also sees courage.
Morrigan respects courage.
This time, she will be lenient. The boar’s form is shrugged lightly aside.
She’s a raven fluttering up into the trees. She looks down at the men below,
croaks loud as they crouch about the fallen warrior.
Morrigan lifts her head, suddenly watchful. The young man’s not alone.
There’s a woman with him. Like him, she wears clothes that make her fade into
the vegetation. She’s young, too. But she’s smaller, broader. Her brown hair’s
tied back and she has a silver stud in her nose.
“Poor bloody fox,” she says.
“We missed all the action. Knew we were heading out the wrong way.” He
glowers at the earth. “We’d better move, and see what they’re up to.“ He
grimaces. “I should’ve guessed that the
Bill was too good to be true.” He
kicks the turf. “Bastards.”
Rummaging in his pocket, he pulls out a thin roll of white paper the length
of his finger. A copper coin comes with it; it’s sitting in the palm of his
hand. He stares at it, tosses it up into the air with a sigh. It spirals down,
gleams briefly as the sun catches it; there’s a plop as it falls into the clear
water of the spring.
They carry the young man
home to the village, and then the rituals begin. The sword must be broken, and
offered to the water, for it has touched immortal flesh and so it can no longer
stay in the realms of the living. The spearhead, too, is split from the haft
and given to the ground. All through the night, they burn fires and sing songs
in her honour.
“What was that for?” the girl asks.
“Aw, you know.” Lighting the rolled-up paper, he breathes deep. “Throw a
coin into a fountain. Make a wish.”
“Crap.”
He sighs, and smoke drifts from his lips. “They believed it, in
prehistoric times. Offering a sacrifice to the
water gods was potent magic.”
Morrigan sits atop the roof
thatch, preening glossy black feathers. Women chant at the young man’s bedside,
but Morrigan knows that this time he’ll live. He’ll limp all his life, but
he’ll bear the scar like a mark of honour. Some men are warriors because they
carry the spear and the axe and the sword. He’s a warrior because he’s fought
the gods, and lived to tell the tale.
“So what would you wish for?” the young woman asks.
“I wish...” He pauses. “I wish we could get rid of this fucking
hunt.”
Morrigan’s nostrils flare. She smells
the copper, the magic metal. She feels the slide of the coin through the water,
the grate as it settles down into the silts of the stream bed,
Once she’d have ignored such a paltry offering. But after a thousand
years of waiting, Morrigan is bored. They’ve used the old magic, so she’ll
grant their wish. She’ll hunt again. She’ll live again.
3 comments:
Wow, this was amazing. It's actually a short story in itself. Very interesting how it all came together; just goes to show you never know when or how that spark of inspiration will emerge. Thanks so much, Louise! Is the full story available somewhere?
Fabulous bit, Louise. You have such a unique voice.
It's one of those stories that wandered around for a while, then slithered into the thickets and sulked when I got bored and moved on to other things. Short stories have a habit of doing that with me - though in this case it was unusual in that I actually finished the thing first!
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